The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes,

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes,
The
afore-mentioned
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illustration describes the steps and machines used in the
cement
-making process and the procedure of making use of
cement
to create concrete for building purposes.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are four main stages in the production of
cement
and four major components to complete the concrete production. In the first stage of the
cement
-making process, limestone and clay are crushed together into a fine powder by a crusher.
Then
, the powder is mixed with other materials in a
rotaing
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rotating
rotting
heater, where it is heated by a flame at one end.
Next,
the heated mixture is ground by a grinder to become
cement
.
Finally
, the
cement
is packed into bags and ready to be used for
transported
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.
Cement
is
also
one of the four basic components of concrete,
along with
water, sand and grave. To produce concrete, 15
percent
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per cent
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of
cement
is mixed with 10
percent
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per cent
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of water, 25
percent
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per cent
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of sand and 50
percent
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per cent
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of small stones. The mixture is
then
put into a concrete mixture, which
mix
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mixes
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the materials together to form a new
aggrgate
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aggregate
called concrete.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • quarrying
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • grinding
  • kiln
  • clinker
  • gypsum
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • building materials
  • limestone
  • clay
  • fine powder
  • rotating
  • cooling
  • hydration
  • aggregate
  • compression
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