You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates the various
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
people
who attend
the evening course at an adult education centre in the year 2009 and Wrong verb form
attended
also
the pie chart tells about the ages of people
who attended these programme
.
Fix the agreement mistake
programmes
According to
the chart
the Add a comma
chart,
people
who attend the language program has
the highest among the other Correct subject-verb agreement
have
programmes
like Drama, Painting , Sculpture and Language.
The Replace the word
programs
women
who participated in Correct quantifier usage
number of women
Sculpture
course is below 10 is less when compared to the Correct article usage
the Sculpture
men
.In painting,the number of men
attend
25 is equal to Wrong verb form
attending
women
30 as-well-as in language
class 40 Correct article usage
the language
women
and 20 men
have came
to class .Change the verb form
come
women
loves
attending drama class Correct subject-verb agreement
love
that is
of nearly 20 women
and 10 men
have attended the evening drama course
Overall
the age
between 50 or
above Correct word choice
and
peoples
have Fix the agreement mistake
people
attend
Change the verb form
attended
the
evening courses in the year 2009 ,Correct article usage
apply
however
the Add a comma
however,
age
people
between 30 to 39 is less when comparing
to the Change the form of the verb
compared
people
of age
between 40 to 49. the least amount was under the age
of 20 at the precentage
of 5 in the year 2009Correct your spelling
percentage
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, women, men, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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