The bar chart below illustrates the amount of time spent on various leisure activities by men and women in a given town in 2019.
The chart displays the difference between male and female's amount of free
time
during the different life stages. These bars also
shows
the comparison Change the verb form
show
beetween
the diverse employments that both Correct your spelling
between
sex's
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sexes
sex
has
.
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have
Overall
, those who are employed, full
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full-time
time
or part
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part-time
time
, has
a much higher free Change the verb form
have
time
. Though,
there are no male statistics on those who are being employed Remove the comma
apply
part
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part-time
time
or who stay at home, we can see that there is a big jump between those with traditional jobs and those without.
Females that are working full
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full-time
time
and part
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part-time
time
tend to have lower
leisure Add an article
a lower
time
with approximately 40 to 50 hours
a week. Whereas
women who are unemployed or retired has
a higher amount of leisure Change the verb form
have
time
with a leap of around 80 hours
per week.
On the other hand
, the male chart demonstates
a significant leap from men who Correct your spelling
demonstrates
works
full Correct subject-verb agreement
work
time
, with around 40 to 50 hours
to men who are employed or retired within a range of 80 hours
per week.Submitted by jovinkacarens28 on
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