The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the average Australian
water
consumption in selected cities for last
year
, while
the pie chart shows how water
was used in Australia for last
year
.
It can clearly be seen that water
supply affected most of the key parts of Australian life and industry, but the most severely affected sector in a shortage would be agriculture.
The highest water
consumer was the city of Perth with 300 kilolitres
per property as an annual average. It was followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, where properties used 250 and about 240 kilolitres
a year
on average. In Sydney
households consumed 200 Add a comma
Sydney,
kilolitres
of water
annually, and the smallest yearly average consumption was recorded in Melbourne and Canberra, about 150 and 140 kilolitres
per property respectively.
Among industries, the largest water
user in Australia last
year
was agriculture, which took up over two thirds
of usage at 67%. The next largest usage was by households (9%), Add a hyphen
two-thirds
water
supply, sewage and drainage (7%) and water
used for electricity and gas supply (7%). The rest was used by manufacturing (4%), other industries (4%) and mining (2%).Submitted by ashissarker18 on
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