Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Rajesh,
I received your letter yesterday and it is so nice to hear from you after a long time. I completely understand that you are confused about whether to continue higher education or start your career and I am quite happy to help you by giving my suggestions on
this
matter.
Since you hardly were regular to the classes when we were graduating last
year, starting your higher education simply means following a sample old routine where you would not only have to regularly go to college but would also
need to work
on projects and assignments almost every day. Moreover
, with a gap, you’ll not have any of our friends, including me, around you which will obviously make college life boring for you.
On the other hand
, why don’t you apply for a job in a bank? I know how much you enjoy being financially independent! There are a lot of vacancies that are being filled with amazing salary packages for freshers so you might get something befitting your aspiration. Besides
, the sooner you start a job, the higher will be your experience for better opportunities in the future. Although
I know you want to work
in the USA, gaining experience in India can be a great start.
With that being said, I guess you can apply for the job of an accountant on Indeed as accounting was your strongest suit and you’ve always been good at handling numbers. Alternatively, you can even join an international firm as a business advisor to work
remotely if you create a Linkedin
account which would come with a lot of flexibility.
Let me know if my ideas Correct your spelling
LinkedIn
work
for you or I’ll come up with more suggestions.
Hope these suggestions will be helpful for you to take a further
decision.
Yours lovingly, faithfully,
UnnikrishnanSubmitted by unnikrishnanpp153 on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph follows a clear and logical progression of ideas; use transitional phrases to connect your thoughts more effectively.
Coherence & Cohesion
A concluding paragraph is essential to bring closure to the letter and reiterate the main points or offer a final suggestion.
Task Achievement
The response needs to address all parts of the task more fully. Ensure that each task bullet point is developed equally and provides specific reasons and examples.
Task Achievement
Maintain formality where appropriate, and use a tone that suits the relationship with the reader. In this case, the tone is suitable and maintains a level of informal friendliness appropriate for the recipient.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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