The charts below show the proportions of consumer expenditure by sector. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict consumer spending changes in seven different categories in 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, the highest proportions were spent on Food/Drink in both years
. Moreover
, Entertainment and Smartphones showed
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have shown
noticable
increase through Correct your spelling
noticeable
years
.
Correct article usage
the years
Firstly
, consumers spent mostly on Food/Drink(42%) and Transport(22%). Ten years
later, the figure of
Food/Drink stayed almost the same at 39%, but Transport dropped remarkably to 12%. Change preposition
for
Spendings
on Clothes and Furniture Fix the agreement mistake
Spending
were
at 10% in 2009 and changed to 8% and 11% after the decade respectively.
One of the biggest changes was Correct subject-verb agreement
was
on
Entertainment growing from 8% to 19%, and another one is Smartphones - from 2% to 10%. Change preposition
in
In contrast
, expenditure on books fell considerably to 1% in 2019 compared to 6% ten years
earlier.Submitted by shakhzodbek.bakhtiyorov on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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