You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer

Dear Teacher Muzaffar, I am writing and request you
this
letter for joining your online
couse
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course
. Privately,
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each part will be explained well-done or step by step by you. So, I want to study your course.
That is
one of the crucial
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for me. Well, I am
awared
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aware
of you by watching
You
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tu
be
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channel
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.
In addition
, On telegram, There are beneficial and paramount details
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been given
untill
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until
this
time. But, I want to be your lesson for learning best
do
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my best. I have a strong desire.
That is
the first cause of my wish based on my field.
Secondly
, It is necessary to be accepted to work. I
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am
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entered the work only after getting
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a certificate
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certificate
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B2 or C1 degree. I will request you. What things need
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performed for joining?
For instance
, How much money does it cost? How much time will be spent to pass
this
lesson? When may
i
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get these
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.
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Thank you beforehand for
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you
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. Based on my requestion, You will decide, accept or answer with fairness. Faithfully, Jumayeva Sarvinoz.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, a logical progression of ideas, and an appropriate conclusion. Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas.
coherence cohesion
Your letter should start with a proper greeting, e.g., 'Dear Mr. Muzaffar,' and end with an appropriate closing, such as 'Yours sincerely,' followed by your full name.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph contains one clear idea or subject. This will help maintain logical organization and clarity throughout the letter.
task achievement
Be clear on the purpose of your letter, stick to the prompt given, and ensure all key components of the task are addressed.
task achievement
The tone of the letter should be consistent and appropriate for the context. A polite and formal tone is usually required in a letter to a teacher.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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