These days, an increasing number of
have been disturbing people from their
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.
Hence
, some people believe that these promotions should be completely prohibited. I agree with
this
statement and
this
essay will explain why.
To begin
, ads in the media are not necessary as they distract individuals from their natural needs.
This
means, that the promotion of particular products on
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TV or
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social media makes people doubt their actual preferences, forcing
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purchase another item,
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even more money.
For example
, the recent introduction of Dyson products
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encourage men and woman to buy these overpriced electric
equipmentsChange the wording
equipment
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,
such
as vacuum
and hair dryers,
instead
of
sameCorrect article usage
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quality cheaper brands they used to have.
Furthermore
, some promotions are unavoidable providing
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inappropriate content for adults
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even children. Some sports channels are allowed to promote
and alcohol products making it impossible to avoid
this
.
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Australian sports platforms,
for example
,
such
as Kayo and Foxtel, which advertise beers and gin liquids during the games.
This
will lead to normalizing alcohol liquids in children's lives and
further
purchasing them.
In conclusion, even though some marketing offers can be beneficial and harmless, most of them are quite
as the viewers cannot avoid them.
Consequently
, removing the ads from the TV and media leads to
of what to buy
as well as
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lives of individuals.