There should be a complete ban for advertising. So that we can benefit from its negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, an increasing number of

advertisments

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advertisements

have been disturbing people from their

routine

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.

Hence

, some people believe that these promotions should be completely prohibited. I agree with

this

statement and

this

essay will explain why.

To begin

, ads in the media are not necessary as they distract individuals from their natural needs.

This

means, that the promotion of particular products on

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TV or

in

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social media makes people doubt their actual preferences, forcing

to

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them to

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purchase another item,

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and spending

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spending

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even more money.

For example

, the recent introduction of Dyson products

which

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encourage men and woman to buy these overpriced electric

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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,

such

as vacuum

clearners

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cleaners

and hair dryers,

instead

of

same

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the same

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quality cheaper brands they used to have.

Furthermore

, some promotions are unavoidable providing

an

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inappropriate content for adults

an

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and

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even children. Some sports channels are allowed to promote

tobaco

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tobacco

and alcohol products making it impossible to avoid

this

advertisment

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advertisement

.

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Australian sports platforms,

for example

,

such

as Kayo and Foxtel, which advertise beers and gin liquids during the games.

This

will lead to normalizing alcohol liquids in children's lives and

further

purchasing them. In conclusion, even though some marketing offers can be beneficial and harmless, most of them are quite

annyoing

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annoying

as the viewers cannot avoid them.

Consequently

, removing the ads from the TV and media leads to

consious dicisions

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conscious decisions

of what to buy

as well as

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peacful

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peaceful

lives of individuals.