The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegitables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegitables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart illustrates the people who like to eat fruit and vegetables daily in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
, we can see the chart increased slightly
then
downward after getting the peak in 2006 and 2007. Looking in more detail, there are no differences for children and men from 2001 to 2003, roughly 12% and 18% respectively, meanwhile, they went up slowly in 2004.
By contrast
, women showed a moderate increase in 2004 become 28%. For the remaining data, men and women had the highest peak in 2006 and downward marginally in 2007 and 2008. Meanwhile, children reached a peak in 2007 at about 27% and went down slowly in 2008.
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