7-5, The charts below show the frequency of being happy in the last four weeks by labour status and by age group. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These charts illustrate the level of happiness by
labor
status and age groups in the previous four weeks.
Change the spelling
labour
Overall
, the pie chart
displays a similar ratio in both age range
. The bar Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
chart
shows while
workers are in education or training, the majority of them feel happy all/most of the time.
In the pie chart
, more than half of the workers feel all/most of their days are joyful in 50
-64 and 65-74 groups, Correct article usage
the 50
however
, the latter is mildly higher, which is 58.3%. Furthermore
, in both groups, about a quarter of the employees regard some parts of their days are happy, and less than one-fifth of them experience happiness in little / none of their time.
In the bar chart
, there are above three out of four of
employees experience happiness in most of their working time Change preposition
apply
while
they are training and in education, in contrast
, when workers are self-employed or retired, these rate
drop to 58.3 and 57% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
rates
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