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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced number of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#forms #communication #email #time #people #friends #effect #lives
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,
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a number
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 of modern forms
user
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 has
decrease
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of
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in
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 society
communicate
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communication
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 and it
efftect on
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 their social
live
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.
On the other hand
, some
people
 say that it
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 on one which there a lot of advantange factors on communication and it become part of our new generation. There are a lot of increasing numbers of
user
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users
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 on a modern and online platform to communicate with
friend
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friends
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 and family
such
 as Line, Instagram,and Facebook.
People
become
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 using more these applications because it is
conveniece
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convenient
convenience
 and faster. Some applications have
a
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 interesting function
that
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in that
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people
 can
easliy
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easily
 get in touch with their
friend
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friends
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 and
famliy
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family
 who live far from them.
For
example
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 v-live, chat, posting picture,
video
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and video
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 call these
fuctions
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functions
people
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 can spend
a
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apply
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time with our society.
Moreover
,
these platform
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this platform
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also
 can
easliy
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easily
 make
a
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apply
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new
friend
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friends
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 or
lover
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lovers
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 to
continues
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continue
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 and
devolop
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develop
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a relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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.
In contrast
, elder
people
 who lack
of
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technology are more disappear from community and social lives.
Older
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citizen
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citizens
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 would
be struggle
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be struggling
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 with
new
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a new
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type
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types
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 of communication and
embarass
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embarrassed
 to use
techology
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technology
.
Instead
 of online
function
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function,
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 they would
pefer
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prefer
 to write a paper or talk
infront
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in front
.
This
 is
following
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followed
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 by the
missunderstand
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misunderstanding
 in
teenager
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teenagers
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 most
of
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elder
citizen
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citizens
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 would not understand new generation things
such
 as vocabulary, weird
emoticon
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emoticons
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, and
meme
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memes
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.
This
lead
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leads
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 to cause in
the
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a
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 lack of communication. In conclusion, some
people
 would love to spend time with
there
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their
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 online community
instead
 of their
friend
 in real life but it
depend
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depends
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 on one some of them would love the traditional ways.
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