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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#businesses #emphasise #products #development
Recent
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 times, the majority of company managers aware of the importance of
the
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publicity
on
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in
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 the business environment and tend to deliver
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novel
products
 to the customers in their adverts. Marketers can grab the attention of consumers with
this
 marketing strategy because they know that
people
 are willing to buy and try new things in their daily
life
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,
however
,
this
 leads to
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a minus
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 effect in terms of wasting money on unnecessary
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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.
To begin
 with, advertisements are
easy
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an easy
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 way to promote the outputs and surge the sales of
of
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a particular entity. To clarify, the competition increases day by day for supplying
people
 with new
products
, which will definitely attract them, and they achieve
this
 through
a
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the
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 right advert.To give an instance, a famous hair care brand "Elidor"
lauch
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launches
new
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a new
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 product every year , which is for
the
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a
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 different
kind
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kinds
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 of hair. So, many women always remember
this
 brand and encounter many types of its
products
 in markets.
On the other hand
,
while
 human beings see the promotion of unfamiliar things, their desire to get
it
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them
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 soars, and
due to
this
psychologal
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psychological
 effect, many purchase
unappropriate
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inappropriate
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 items. A number of
people
 want to try new things in order to run away
their
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from their
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 routine
life
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lives
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 and
squender
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spend
 money on new phones,
cars
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and cars
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.
For instance
,
people
 all over the world spend approximately 5 billion dollars every year to buy newly introduced Apple phones.
Moreover
, Apple
represent
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represents
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 novel smartphones, that have many prevalences
in contrast
 to the older versions and
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the
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company uses its marketing style efficiently
for attracting
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to attract
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people
.
To sum up
, all companies use
the
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promotion
for increasing
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to increase
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their revenue
on
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from
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 new
products
 in modern life
awaring
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awarding
 of some group of
people
, who will demand
such
 kind of output.
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 it has
negative
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a negative
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 influence on
people
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people's
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budget
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budgets
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.
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  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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