The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The process illustrates the way in which
cement
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is manufactured and is used for making concrete to construct.
Overall
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, there are four steps in
cement
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production, beginning with limestone and clay and ending with packaged
cement
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. From
this
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, the manufacture of concrete only needs one stage with a mixer. Beginning with the procedure of manufacturing
cement
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,
the first step is
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crushing limestone and clay into power before putting them into the mixer. Afterwards, the mixed powder is transferred to a rotating heater and is heated to a certain point in order to be
grinded
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ground
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by a metal tool before it is turned into
the
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apply
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cement
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. The
cement
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then
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is ready to package into bags and marketed for sale. Concrete is produced more simply. It mainly consists of small stones called gravel, which accounted for 50%. The remaining ingredients include
cement
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with 15%, sand with 25% and water with 10%. They are blended into a tool to grind and the
resulting
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is
concrete
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a concrete
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mixer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • quarrying
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • grinding
  • kiln
  • clinker
  • gypsum
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • building materials
  • limestone
  • clay
  • fine powder
  • rotating
  • cooling
  • hydration
  • aggregate
  • compression
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