The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The maps depict a business district in the town of Norbiton and a project for expansion.

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, there are many altars

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constructions which are

inended

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intended

to be created. First and foremost, there is a combination of residential and commercial features in the plan. All present factories will be replaced by houses.

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, the factory

at the end

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of the road will be knocked down and the school will be developed at that place. There will be a playground next to the school, too. Thereby, a medical centre will be put up in the ester-southern

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part

of the town,

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a shop will be built near the roundabout. Another major change to an area is the expansion of the road.

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, it will come across the river and cross to the new house.

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