The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The bar plot interprets the data about the proportion of English
people
who donated funds to charity by different ages in the two respective years 1990 and 2010.
There are five types of age groups such
as 18 to 25, 26 to 35, 36 to 50, 51 to 65 and more than 65. The activity of giving money to charities was seen as a common thing of
British men and women.
The report was given in a gap of two decades. There's a major difference between these two periods. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, in the year
1990, more people
preferred to donate to charity than in 2010. Neither the younger adult group
nor the mid-adult group
donated less amount than in the year
2010. Besides
, the youngest people
gave more than one time of money that was given by them in 2010.
Whereas
, the eldest adult group
and older people
donated more funds when compared to the year
1990. In addition
, the eldest adult group
stood as the largest donor for the year
2010.Submitted by insighttribez on
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