The graph shows the precentage of people aged over 60 in Canda,Finland and Korea beteen 1950 nand 2050.

The graph shows the precentage of people aged over 60 in Canda,Finland and Korea beteen 1950 nand 2050.
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of people aged over 60 in
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Canada

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,Finland and Korea
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