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YOU HAVE TO RECIEVE THIS EMAIL FROM WHO YOU WENT TO COLLEGE WITH. Do you know it will be five years since we finished college ? i think we should contact our friends and arrange to meet again.Have you got any ideas about what we could do to celebrat e and when? write and tell me jan write an email to jan : suggest a good way to celebrate with your old college friends explain when would be the best time for the celebrate offer to help organise the celebrate

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Dear Jan, How are you ? I hope you are doing fine. Time flies , can you imagine that?
this
 is five years since we parted. You can come to Malaysia for one week or two to get a rest from our jobs, we can do a lot of things
such
 as going to Twins Tower and taking photos behind ,
also
 we can have a popular dinner,
in addition
 , we can travel to the island and rent a tent as camping. I can contact our college friends on Instagram,
also
 I'll tell them about
this
 idea ,and discuss
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it. Best regards, Oula
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay follows a clear structure, with distinct paragraphs for introduction, body, and conclusion. The use of logical connectors and transition words should be employed to enhance the flow of information and coherence.
task achievement
Your essay should fully address all parts of the task. Each paragraph should be dedicated to addressing a specific part of the prompt clearly. The email should suggest a way to celebrate, explain the best time for it and offer help in the organisation, with specific actions or ideas.

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