The two charts provide data about two types of TV programmes watched by women and men and four separate age groups in Australia.
The two bar charts
provides
information about the proportion of Change the verb form
provide
audience
watching reality shows and Correct article usage
the audience
game
shows based on gender and age
groups in Australia.
Overall
, more female watch reality shows content compared to male while
the audiences of game
shows is more balance
.
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According to
the bar chart, the percentage
of female
watching reality shows is higher than Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
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the male
percentage
by gap
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a gap
around
34%. Based on the Change preposition
of around
age
group
, the highest percentage
of viewers with
just below 70% comes from Change preposition
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45+
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the 45+
age
group
, followed by other
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other aged groups
aged
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35-44 years old at 68%, 25-34 at 60% and 16-24% at 50%.
In contrast
, the rates of female
and Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
watching Fix the agreement mistake
males
game
shows are same
at 60%. In the context of Correct article usage
the same
age
group
, the most viewers comes
from people aged 45+ at 70%, followed by children and early adults aged from 16 to 24 at 50%. The Change the verb form
come
adults
viewers of Change the noun form
adult
game
shows aged 25-34 years old have the lowest percentage
at 38%, it
is 2% lower than the 35-44 years old Correct pronoun usage
which
age
group
at 40%.Submitted by ryanrush16 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words game, age, percentage, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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