The two charts provide data about two types of TV programmes watched by women and men and four separate age groups in Australia.

The two charts provide data about two types of TV programmes watched by women and men and four separate age groups in Australia.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two charts provide data about two types of TV programmes watched by women and men and four separate age groups in Australia.
The two bar charts
provides
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information about the proportion of
audience
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the audience
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watching reality shows and
game
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shows based on gender and
age
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groups in Australia.
Overall
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, more female watch reality shows content compared to male
while
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the audiences of
game
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shows is more
balance
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balanced
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.
According to
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the bar chart, the
percentage
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of
female
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females
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watching reality shows is higher than
male
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the male
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percentage
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by
gap
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a gap
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around
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of around
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34%. Based on the
age
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group
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, the highest
percentage
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of viewers
with
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apply
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just below 70% comes from
45+
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the 45+
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age
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group
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, followed by
other
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another aged group
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aged
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group
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35-44 years old at 68%, 25-34 at 60% and 16-24% at 50%.
In contrast
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, the rates of
female
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females
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and
male
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males
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watching
game
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shows are
same
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the same
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at 60%. In the context of
age
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group
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, the most viewers
comes
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come
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from people aged 45+ at 70%, followed by children and early adults aged from 16 to 24 at 50%. The
adults
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adult
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viewers of
game
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shows aged 25-34 years old have the lowest
percentage
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at 38%,
it
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which
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is 2% lower than the 35-44 years old
age
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group
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at 40%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words game, age, percentage, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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