The line graph illustrates the number of UK people commuting to work every day by car, bus or train from 1970 to 2030
The line graph provides us
information
about the Change preposition
with information
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
in the UK commuting to work on a daily basis by three types of transport in 60 year period.
Overall
, as it
can be seen from the graph, the number of Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
using cars and trains are
rising gradually during the period given. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
On the contrary
, the usage of the bus has been declining sligthly
. Another Correct your spelling
slightly
isnteresting
fact Correct your spelling
interesting
that
Add a missing verb
is that
,
the car is Remove the comma
apply
most
Correct article usage
the most
prefered
kind of transport.
Correct your spelling
preferred
To begin
with, in 1970 people
the amount of people
started to use the
Correct article usage
apply
car
about 5 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
million
and will be reached
a point of 9 Wrong verb form
reach
million
by 2030 which illustrates a
considerable growth.The same tendency can Correct article usage
apply
by
2030 respectively. Add a missing verb
be by
By contrast
, there were
a steady fall from 4 Change the verb form
was
million
people
in 1970 to 3 million
predicted by 2030.Submitted by roker123456 on
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