The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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This
given
chart illustrates the choices of Anthropology alumni from a University after graduation Verb problem
apply
of
their bachelor's degree. The table shows information about how much salaries were gained by the anthropologists after working for five years. Change preposition
with
Overall
, more than a
half alumni of Anthropology are full-time workers.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, the Anthropology graduates had a choice to work full time
after finishing their university degree Add a hyphen
full-time
accounted
for 52%. Wrong verb form
accounting
However
, only 5% of the alumni became part-timers and continued their master's degrees.
After dedicating within five years, the anthropologists working as freelance consultants, as a civil servants
and Correct the article-noun agreement
a civil servant
civil servants
working
in private organizations were paid 100,000+ Verb problem
apply
reached
40%, 50% and 30% respectively.Wrong verb form
reaching
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