The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar chart shows information about the percentage of people who were born in
Australia
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and many were born outside
Australia
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which resides in a variety of places
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as cities,
towns
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, and rural areas between 1995 and 2010. As can be seen in the table, it is obvious that those who live in cities whether inside or outside have a higher average birth than those other places in 1995 and 2010. If we look at people who were born in rural areas, there is a dramatic decrease in whether born inside and outside from 1995 to 2010, in
Australia
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compared to 30 to 15 and outside
Australia
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compared to 40 to 10. Many who were born in
towns
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also
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declined from 20 to 10 in
Australia
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between 1995 and 2010,
while
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outside
Australia
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remained constant at 10. In conclusion, the number of individuals who were born inside and outside Cities marginally increases, apart from people born outside
towns
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as the new population in rural areas and
towns
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considerably drops.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, towns with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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