write at least 180 words you live in a room in college which you share with another student . however, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college . in the letter , describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer begin your letter as follows: Dear sir or madam

Dear
madam
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Madam
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, I am writing
this
letter right now to describe my situation and I hope to find a solution for me. I live in a room with my colleague at university , I
don't
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am not
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satisfied
for
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with
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this
accommodation for several reasons:
Firstly
, my peer is
kindly
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kind
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and
much
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apply
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friendly ,
however
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however,
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she is unregular ,
while
I want to sleep early to get up early she
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wants
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want
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want to
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be
unsleep
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unsleeped
,
also
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and also
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to keep the light on ,
this
a one of our disagreements.
Secondly
, she
all
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has all
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time
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the
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opens
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open
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a music
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music
a piece of music
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and songs ,
for
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and for
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this
reason I can't be
care
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careful
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and regular
for
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in
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my
study
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studies
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.
Consequently
, I want to
require from
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request
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you to change my room , I prefer
to
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you to
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give me
room
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a room
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alone without anyone with me . Thank you. Best wishes Oula
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coherence cohesion
It is important to maintain a clear logical structure throughout the letter, including a proper introduction, development of points, and a conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Include appropriate greetings and closings to frame the letter in a respectful and formal tone.
coherence cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph and use paragraphing to enhance readability and organization.
task achievement
Make sure to fully address all parts of the task with relevant details to meet the requirements of the prompt.
task achievement
Use a tone that is polite and formal, suitable for the context of writing to an authority figure.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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