The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005.

The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005.
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The bar graph compares
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of housework in Great Britain in the space of two decades( 1985,1995 and 2005) by fully employed males and females with different levels of work. Looking from an
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perspective,
it is clear that
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time spent on domestic increased for all groups with the exception of "underemployed women" which remained unchanged in general.
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,it is
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apparent that those with full-time jobs did comparatively little over the period. Plausible as
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seems,
this
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figure for "underemployed females" made up 7
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before there was a small dip to about 6
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in 1995, afterwards, they came back to the initial point in 2005.
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, "women with part-time employment" recorded 5
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in 1995,
furthermore
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, witnessed a noticeable growth to 6
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at the end
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of the period.
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, both trends
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undertook the lowest
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in chores namely, " women and men full-time employment".
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, females and men experienced negligibly rise from 2 and 1
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to around 3 and 2
hours
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respectively in 2005.
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