The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005.
The bar graph compares
hours
of housework in Great Britain in the space of two decades( 1985,1995 and 2005) by fully employed males and females with different levels of work.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is clear that
time spent on domestic increased for all groups with the exception of "underemployed women" which remained unchanged in general. Moreover
,it is also
apparent that those with full-time jobs did comparatively little over the period.
Plausible as this
seems, this
figure for "underemployed females" made up 7 hours
before there was a small dip to about 6 hours
in 1995, afterwards, they came back to the initial point in 2005. However
, "women with part-time employment" recorded 5 hours
in 1995, furthermore
, witnessed a noticeable growth to 6 hours
at the end
of the period.
In contrast
, both trends which
undertook the lowest Correct pronoun usage
apply
hours
in chores namely, " women and men full-time employment". In particular
, females and men experienced negligibly rise from 2 and 1 hours
to around 3 and 2 hours
respectively in 2005.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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