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The graph below show the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012

The graph below show the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012
#show #population #figures #turtles #india
The line graph displays how the population of various
turtles
 changed in India from 1980 to 2012.
Overall
, all
species
 were equal in
index
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the index
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 in the beginning and,
total
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the total
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 numbers of indices
all
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for all
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species
 have fluctuated over
the
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apply
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time
.
However
, it went up slightly
in
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at
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 the end of
time
. Meanwhile, Olive Ridley
turtles
 could
achieved
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 the highest influx among others. Olive ridley
turtles
 were 100 indexed in 1980
as
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same as
other
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the other
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 two types,
although
 it surpassed the number remaining types in 1986 as it was nearly 11.
This
species
then
 rocketed to almost 135 in 1997, marking its
maxium
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maximum
 number
thereafter
.
Then
 following a series of
fluctautions
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fluctuations
,
finally
 the count was approximately 130 in 2012. During the whole
time
 period, the total population
index
was fluctuating
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 as it increased from 10 indices
since
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in
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 1980
from
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to
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 100
index
. Green
turtles
 were the most prominent
species
 until 1984, as it was nearly
index
 of 105,
however
,
this
 fluctuated over the
time
 course
while
 it remained as the second highest
species
 from 1987 to 2012.
At
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In
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2012, it declined
up
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to
index
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an index
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 of 90.
Leather back
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Leatherback
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turtles
 were equal with
other
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others
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to
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in population
at
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in
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 1987
as
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but it had a steep drop down
thereafter
. Its count
finally
 was 60 which was the least among all others.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, however, thereafter".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turtles, species, index, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Endangered species
  • Conservation efforts
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Poaching
  • Habitat loss
  • Reproductive rates
  • Predation
  • Environmental changes
  • Climate impact
  • Ecological significance
  • Species decline
  • Protection measures
  • Wildlife management
  • Population trend
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