The bar chart shows the percentages of the UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011.
The flow chart indicates a comparison of the rate of workers in five different areas in the UK in two particular years 1841 and 2011.
Overall
, the percentage of staff in the service industry is the highest amount and in energy and water major is at least.
The striking figures show that the proportion of people in service major in 2011 was 80% and 33% in 1841 however
the highest percentage related to 1841 is 36% in manufacturing which was 9% in 2011. what stands out is the energy and water industry had just involved a few workforces by 1% and 3% respectively in 2011 and 1841. It is clear that
the figures in 1841 manufacturing and services were close to each other and they had a little difference but in 2011 this
amount is more, it was about 70%.
To sum up
, the rate of workers in the UK was slight and they were under 10% regardless of the service industry by contrast
, in 1841 merely two majors under 10% were construction at 5% and energy and water at 3%.Submitted by kmibehnaz98 on
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