Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, peoples
are loving
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travel, In our busy life visiting
places
give
more
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us more
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mind
relax
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and
happy
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. Part of the
people
decide
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areas
go
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to visit,
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another
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part of
people
go to
tour
different areas
such
sahara
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Sahara
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desert or
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
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. They decide based on their money and mindset. When we decide
go
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to different areas that will give advantages and drawbacks.
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paragraph
that
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will discuss. On the one hand, if select
go
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to
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the sahara
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sahara
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Sahara
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desert or the Antarctic,
that
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those
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places
give more different
relax
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relaxation
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and
enjoy
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enjoyment
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. more researchers going to
this
type of
places
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place
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because very useful
their
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research.
for instance
, most of the research
report
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reports
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show different
culture
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cultures
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, nature, and
about
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apply
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foods. These
places
give new
experience
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experiences
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and lesions. most
of
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the
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apply
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foreigners like to go
these
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to these
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places
,
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because they like different
climate
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climates
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and
also
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hacking.
On the other hand
, some difficult face where the select these
places
peoples, because do not adapt anyone different
places
very
quick
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.
this
type of
people
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person
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feel
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these
places
tour
give
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have
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drawbacks. And do not have water and
foods
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food
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all
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in all
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the
places
, and
living
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they live with
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different
type
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types
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of humans and animals.
For example
, more
report
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reports
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show that
places
not
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are not
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secure
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at any
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any
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all
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time
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times
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, and kids,
elders
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and elders
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face many problems. younger can manage. Have
not
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no
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transport facilities, In conclusion,
people
like to go to
tour
another place
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other places
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, so that
give
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gives
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many advantages and some disadvantages.
This
is based on select
places
and select methods, before
plan
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planning
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go to
tour
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on tour
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will see the climate changes,
cultural
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and cultural
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changes, from the already went to
people
’s reports,
then
we will plan
go
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to go
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to
places
, that give more benefits and without
face
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facing
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difficulties.
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