The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement

There are plenty of discussions about the science’s aim.

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an array of masses argue that science should concentrate on

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, others emphasize that there are more fields that

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need to pay attention to many fields

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as space exploration.

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that people’s lives

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undeniably essential and it is the mission of

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in the context of the 21st century. First and foremost, there is no doubt that myriads of cures and

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, which have been conducted by experts, are original from scientific research. During

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the Covid-19

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pandemic, there are a large number of people have died from the virus. But thanks to the vaccine, the spread of illness

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been lessened. Before Covid-19, there

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several diseases but all of them had been cured by research and medicine.

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can develop innovations which

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to a better understanding

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medicine. In the future, there will be more findings to improve people’s quality

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create more new technological devices.

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, science can be crucial in addressing environmental issues. The explanations from professionals will help us know the complex problems and essential solutions.

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is a polluted habitat, they will find out the reasons, suggest a way to reduce pollution and take advantage of waste where the recycling process is available.

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,

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usually encourage some alternative energy

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to decrease the amount of fossil fuel we consume daily. In conclusion, I totally agree that science may be used as a tool to improve our society. In the future, there are increasingly remarkable issues and

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must have an impact on solutions.