The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The rendered set of maps illustrates the changes that have occurred in the infrastructure of the public libraries 20 years ago and changes in the central Library today.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that a number of changes have taken place such
as the reading room
being replaced by a computer room
, the lecture room
taking the place of children's books
and others.
According to
the given data, the main attraction of a community library was CDs, videos, computer and games facilities which is estimated to change in the upcoming days by sort of new facilities such
as storytelling events, children's fiction books
along with
sitting areas. Moreover
, in the northern as well as
in the southern directions there were tables and chairs in the centre of the floor which will be vanished
in the future. Wrong verb form
vanish
Furthermore
, entry into the library will be unchanged in the upcoming days.
Moving further
, the enquiry desk and others have been shifted by the cafe. Meanwhile, adult fiction books
will be changed into all reference books
in the West and in the East side adult fiction books
have been added along with
self-service machines. Lastly
, the reading room
has been estimated to be replaced with a computer de room
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with, such".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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