The chart below show the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.
The pie charts compare the ratio of
time
spent in various activities in the day
of working adults in 1958 and 2008. All in all, people at work slept less and worked more when compared to the past. People also
spend less time
on social activities and instead
stay at home more often.
Back in 1958, working adults spent equivalent time
sleeping and working, both taking one-third of a day
. People also
used
around one-fifth of a Wrong verb form
use
day
to go out with friends and families, which is more than double the time
relaxing at home. Other activities such
as travelling to work ,hobbies and playing sports took the remaining 8%.
But after five decades, although
sleeping and working still took two third
of a Correct your spelling
two-thirds
day
of working adults in total, the time
used for sleeping dropped to one-fourth of a day
. Moreover
, the time
spent on relaxing at home was more than double on
the 6% Change preposition
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time
for going out, which was the opposite of that in 1958. The time
spent on hobbies and sports remained the same though, while
that on travelling to work experienced a 4-fold increase.Submitted by jackcityone on
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