In order for
government
and the societies they control to improve, it is necessary that
support
be provided to the next generation of thinkers
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pursue postgraduate studies. With
this
idea of
government
support
in mind, we have to consider putting all of the funding towards
science
, which is the controversial stance that some desire. Providing the entirety of the money towards
science
is a horrible idea, as arts and
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communication
are equally deserving of
this
postgraduate financing.
Although
some might
support
the idea of only funding
science
, they would be incorrect because the Arts are just as valuable and deserving of monetary
support
. Not only does
art
promote creativity, but
also
it enlightens others
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culture in
ways
that
science
cannot accomplish.
Science
is an example of creativity, but it is not as expressive as
art
because when we witness
art
we get a glimpse of the nature of the universe and the creative insights of the human brain in
ways
not limited by
science
.
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to
this
convincing point, one of the primary
ways
we learn about other cultures is when their
art
is brought to our museums, and
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norms. The arguments presented here are convincing, but we have one more persuasive topic to cover.
The
government
should provide funds
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postgraduate
communication
studies because they are equally impactful as
science
. Where would our world be if we had not become better at solving problems and enhancing relationships through better
communication
? Many potential world wars have been resolved without bloodshed because of former postgraduate students who specialized in negotiation (
communication
), and
therefore
the
government
should
support
this
field. Moving on to the next argument, some might state that
science
has improved relationships with social media;
however
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giving money to postgraduates who study relationship
communication
will improve us in
ways
that
science
cannot. These supporting points show why we should not
support
only
science
.
There is too much focus on
science
in our modern times and
as a
we are losing the aspects of ourselves that have gotten through changes in civilization.
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almost having god-like qualities, but actually the areas of
art
and
communication
are equally valuable. Successful relationships are based on
communication
, not
science
.