Tha chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan

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information

population

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number over a 55 years period between 1950 to 2055,Looking from an

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perspective.It is readily apparent that there

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trend in 1950 the total population 4,9%.There be a

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trend

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2035 to 2055.

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,at the details,the percentage of 20.0% stood at 41.0% in 50 years. A

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trend be recorded in 2035 during the period,which goes up by 2055 from

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6% between 2035 to 2055

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41,0%,Following that,In 2005 the peaks at 20.0%,We see a huge increase over

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