Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cinema

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is not only a branch of

art

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but

also

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a good way

for

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socializing. Since its invention

cinema

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has created its businesses, actors and actresses. With

amendmends

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amendments

in new streaming

services

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, the alternative ways for watching a

movie

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have increased. At that

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there comes a question to minds: whether cinemas are losing their value or importance. It can be easily stated that thanks to the developments in new streaming

services

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and new platforms accessing a new

movie

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is becoming easier,

however

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, the value of

cinema

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is still existing in

art

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society.

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, with the new platforms like Netflix or Amazon Prime, the number of

movies

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, drama series and

sit-coms

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have

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risen in recent days.

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consequence

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people do not have to go to a

cinema

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for watching

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a

movie

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any more.

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,

according to

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many individuals watching a

movie

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at their home is more comfortable and cheaper than

go

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to a

cinema

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saloon. Imagine a man who wears his pajamas

and

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apply

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prepares some snacks and watches a

movie

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in

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his sofa. In comparison with another figure

goes

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who goes

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to a mall for a

movie

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, who suffers from heavy traffic and buys

overprice

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popcorn and has to wait in line for

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, the former one is likely to feel more satisfied and happier

at the end

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of the

movie

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.

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, one should always remember that

as a result

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of extended streaming

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people may access

to

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the new

movies

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with less effort.

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, despite the mentioned pros the importance of the

cinema

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should not be overlooked by society. Considering

cinema

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is an essential way for conveying a message to

public

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the public

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and

socilazing

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socializing

.

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, a character who prefers to meet his friends

at

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outside

for watching

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a

movie

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instead

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of

stays

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at home alone is likely to feel more related to the public.

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, he rarely suffers from the sense of loneliness which is a pervasive concern in the modern world.

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,

art

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is the key element for building a comprehensive

individuals

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and teenagers may broaden their horizons if they watch some significant

movies

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like Pianist,

instead

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of an ordinary

movieseries

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series

. As long as a youngster spends his time with certain

movies

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, his awareness is likely to increase and he will

be transfer

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into a sophisticated and emphatic adult in his later life. To wrap up,

cinema

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is still crucial for socializing and constructing

well- rounded

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individuals.

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, all the things are taken into

an

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account, despite

new

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and common using streaming

services

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bring

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some pros, including saving money and feeling more comfortable,

cinema

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is still saving its position as an important

art

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branch and common

activitiy

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activity

activities

among

the

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people. It is important to be aware of the value of the

cinema

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,

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while

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benefiting the new streaming

services

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.