Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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some people argue that

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study

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studying

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in a group will increase the efficiency

for

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of

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students,

while

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others

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think

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study

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studying

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alone

it

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is more effective. In my point of view, I believe

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study

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with other people is better for

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a person

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person

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future

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. In

this

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essay, I will

disscus

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discuss

both views and explain my opinion. Some think

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study

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studying

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with other people will be better and increase efficiency.

This

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is because will help the

future

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employee to have

team

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teamwork

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work

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and the

ability

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to learn faster. To start with, learning with a group will improve the

ability

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to

work

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in a team. To illustrate, after

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student

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students

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graduate and

getting

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get

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their

bachelors

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bachelor's

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and

goining

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go

to

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into

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the

job

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market, no one in the company will

work

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alone, they should

work

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with other employees in different departments.

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, having the

ability

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to learn with

others

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will help

to

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them to

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learn and understand faster for the

student

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, they ask questions when they don't understand.

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,

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study

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studying

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alone will have some benefits for the learner. Not only by

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avoiding

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distraction and

save

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saving

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time

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, but

also

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increase

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by increasing

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the

ability

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for

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to

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make a plan.

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, learning with

others

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will

make

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cause

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many

distraction

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distractions

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and

lost

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waste

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a lot of

time

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, by discussing many

unrelvent

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unrelated

topics or playing and

laughting

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laughing

.

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,

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study

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studying

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alone will give the

student

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the

ability

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for

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to

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make his own plan, to set the

time

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when to

study

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or

having

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have

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fun or even eat. In my opinion,

student

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have to focus

in

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on

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their

future

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and their

future

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job

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, they are going to need the

ability

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to

work

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on

time

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. Because

,

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apply

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it is more

work

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faster and more efficient in their

job

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. In conclusion, some argue working with a team will help

in

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them in

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the

future

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and the

ability

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to learn faster,

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others

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while others

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think studying alone will give them the

ability

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to

work

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in their

schdule

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schedule

and

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apply

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to

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apply

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avoid any

distraction

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distractions

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and save

time

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. For me,

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study

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studying

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in a group will help to prepare them for

the

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a

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future

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job

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.