The graph shows information about spending on electronic goods from 2001 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows information about spending on electronic goods from 2001 to 2010 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of, and make comparisons where relevant.
The 3-line graph represents information about the huge amount of money people pay to purchase electronic goods through 3 channels, over a decade from 2001 till 2010 , calculated in US dollars.It was found that
sales
increased to different degrees through 3 channels After taking a closer look at the details, it turns out that
sales
of electronics and appliances started at $80 billion in 2001. After three years, the amount of
sales
increased for all channels.
This
increase
continued until it reached its peak in 2008, estimated at between 120 and 137 billion for both offline and retail
sales
. From 2008 to 2010, these
sales
declined and
then
recovered.
On the other hand
,
e-commereic
Correct your spelling
e-commerce
sales
followed different patterns. In 2001, the number of
sales
reached zero, and in fact, they started from there. There is a slight, negligible
increase
over the four years.
Then
there was a slight steady
increase
until the peak was
finally
reached and the
increase
reached 20 billion.
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