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JOb application letter .introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have

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I would like to apply for the position of Technical support officer advertised in "Times" on January 19th,2023. I graduated from the University of Manchester in 2019 with a degree in Computer science and technology. At present, I am employed as an IT Support Engineer by the company Pathway Communications. For the past two years, I have worked as a Technical Support agent and I was responsible for communicating with clients, gathering requirements, troubleshooting and providing a step-by-step solution for problems. I consider myself to be reliable, hard-working and enthusiastic. I am used to working at a fast pace to meet deadlines. I believe the position you offer will give me the opportunity to apply my skills and add
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure logical progression of ideas throughout the letter by using cohesive devices effectively and organising information in a coherent manner.
Coherence & Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present but could be strengthened to hook the reader and provide a decisive final assertion about your suitability for the job.
Coherence & Cohesion
Strengthen support for main points by expanding on context, details, and providing concrete evidence of achievements or specific skills developed in previous roles.
Task Achievement
Ensure the letter thoroughly responds to the prompts given, consider addressing each detail that the prospective employer may seek in an applicant.
Task Achievement
Develop clear and comprehensive ideas further by using a range of structures and high-level vocabulary, while remaining formally professional and concise.
Task Achievement
Integrate relevant, specific examples that demonstrate unique skills or experiences, tailoring them to match the job requirements and showcasing personal value to the employer.

Fully explain your ideas

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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