The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
giveb
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given
diagram illustrates the different stages of
production
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the production
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of perfume in
details
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detail
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are a total of ten different stages, beginning with heating
water
and culminating in
obtain
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an
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apply
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aromatic
water
. In detail, the process
is beginning
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with heating
water
via fire, and
then
the produced steam is moved through a specially-designed system into another section of
designed
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system. In the second case,
which
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in which
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aromatic plants are placed in it, the steam
mixed
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is mixed
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with aromatic plants.
Hence
,
mixture
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a mixture
the mixture
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of steam and oil
vapor
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vapour
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is obtained.
Next,
via a
condensator
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condensator,
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this
mixture is transformed into
water
mixed with essential oil.
This
stage
is benefitted
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benefits
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from cold and hot
water
for condensation. In
tha
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the
last
stage,
this
mixture is
seperated
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separated
into essential oil and hydrolat.
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