The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

giveb

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given

diagram illustrates the different stages of

production

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the production

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of perfume in

details

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detail

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Overall

it is clear that

there are a total of ten different stages, beginning with heating

water

and culminating in

obtain

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obtaining

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apply

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aromatic

water

. In detail, the process

is beginning

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with heating

water

via fire, and

then

the produced steam is moved through a specially-designed system into another section of

designed

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system. In the second case,

which

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in which

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aromatic plants are placed in it, the steam

mixed

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is mixed

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with aromatic plants.

Hence

mixture

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a mixture

the mixture

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of steam and oil

vapor

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vapour

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is obtained.

Next,

via a

condensator

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condensator,

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this

mixture is transformed into

water

mixed with essential oil.

This

stage

is benefitted

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benefits

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from cold and hot

water

for condensation. In

tha

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the

last

stage,

this

mixture is

seperated

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separated

into essential oil and hydrolat.

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