The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph demonstrates

that

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apply

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how much

consuption

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consumption

of energy is recorded since 1980 in the USA between 1980 and 2030.

Overall

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, It is obviously seen that consumption of Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural

Gas

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,Nuclear and Solar/Wind

steadly

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steadily

increased,

while

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Hydropower

remain

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remained

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more or less the same during the given time.

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, consumption of Petrol and

Gas

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and Coal

peak

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peaked

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at their highest points

at the end

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of the period. Regarding Petrol and Oil

starts

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started

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with

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35 Quadrillion in 1980 and is erratic during the period until its peak point almost 50 in 2030

comparability

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compared

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with Coal and Natural

gas

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Similarily

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Similarly

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, Coal and and Natural

Gas

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have recorded their maximum rates

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of 30

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and 20, respectively, in 2030.

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, the other energies, namely- Nuclear, Solar/Wind begin,

approximetely

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approximately

, 3

quadrillition

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quadrillion

in 1980 and

rise

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rose

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slowely

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slowly

whereas

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Hydropower experienced the same rate

with

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Nuclear ad Solar/Wind but

increase

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increased

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at a slow pace.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

energy consumption
projections
renewable energy
non-renewable resources
sustainable
fossil fuels
nuclear energy
biofuels
hydroelectric power
solar energy
wind energy
trends
increases/decreases
shifts
milestones
significant
forecast
implications
sustainable development

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