The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph demonstrates
that
how much Correct word choice
apply
consuption
of energy is recorded since 1980 in the USA between 1980 and 2030.
Correct your spelling
consumption
Overall
, It is obviously seen that consumption of Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Linking Words
Gas
,Nuclear and Solar/WindUse synonyms
steadly
increased, Correct your spelling
steadily
while
Hydropower Linking Words
remain
more or less the same during the given time. Wrong verb form
remained
In addition
, consumption of Petrol and Linking Words
Gas
and Coal Use synonyms
peak
at their highest points Wrong verb form
peaked
at the end
of the period.
Regarding Petrol and Oil Linking Words
starts
Wrong verb form
started
with
35 Quadrillion in 1980 and is erratic during the period until its peak point almost 50 in 2030 Change preposition
at
comparability
with Coal and Natural Replace the word
compared
gas
.
Use synonyms
Linking Words
Similarily
, Coal and and Natural Correct your spelling
Similarly
Gas
have recorded their maximum rates Use synonyms
30
and 20, respectively, in 2030.
Change preposition
of 30
In contrast
, the other energies, namely- Nuclear, Solar/Wind begin, Linking Words
approximetely
, 3 Correct your spelling
approximately
quadrillition
in 1980 and Correct your spelling
quadrillion
rise
Wrong verb form
rose
slowely
,Correct your spelling
slowly
whereas
Hydropower experienced the same rate Linking Words
with
Nuclear ad Solar/Wind but Change preposition
as
increase
at a slow pace.Wrong verb form
increased
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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