The diagrams compare the present and future plan of one particular company with detailed information.

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The two picture shows the reconstruction plan of a building of a company which changes dramatically in its layout. At present, the building is located between two grass areas that will be removed in the future.

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the building will be more expansive than now and there are some new areas and facilities,

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as a coffee machine and meeting area, will be added to the expanded space .

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, the entrance door will be moved to the middle of the front wall from the present position which is

at the end

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right

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side.

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, there are four small offices by the reception.

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, in the new plan, offices will become larger and two of them will be moved to the back wall.

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, the stock room hasn't been changed

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the canteen and bathroom will be removed.

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, the new design emphasizes the usage of the space of the company, so that staff can work more comfortably and effectively.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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