The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The data provides information about the monthly changes in the cost of three

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of metals in 2014.

Overall

,

copper

as well as

nickel

and

zinc

fluctuates

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over

the

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all

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period of time and

finally

got approximately similar rates.

It is clear that

at the beginning

2014

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,

nickel

was the most expensive metal with

6

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percent

indicator,

whereas

copper

and

zinc

was

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2 and 1, respectively.

Nickel

showed

dramatically

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decrease between January and June and troughed to -3

percent

, but after that slightly rose up to -1.

As a result

,

nickel

price

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prices

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fluctuated in the rest of

period

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and

finally

grew to 1

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in December.

On the other hand

, the changes in prices of

copper

and

zinc

consist

more

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stability.

Zinc

, on its own, peaked

3

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percent

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in February and reached a bottom -1 in October, but

at

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December stopped

in

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a

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2

percent

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.

Although

,

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copper

steadily

decline

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declined

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between January and June, its price

reach

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reached

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roughly 1.5 percentage changes in December 2014.