The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plot illustrates the way in which instant noodles are produced.
Overall
, there are 8 different stages while
manufacuring
the noodles. The process Correct your spelling
manufacturing
begin
with flour coming into the manufacturing site to store in the storage silos and Change the verb form
begins
end
with Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
labeling
and sealing.
Change the spelling
labelling
At
the first stage of Change preposition
In
this
process, the flours in truck
move into the storage silos and Correct article usage
the truck
then
transferred into mixer
for blending with water and oil to make Add an article
the mixer
a mixer
noodle’s
dough. After that, the dough enters the rollers to gain Change noun form
noodle
consistent
shape as sheets. It undergoes, Correct article usage
a consistent
subsequently
the cutting phase to seperate
the dough as strips and Correct your spelling
separate
following
this
the strips undergo the machine that forms the strips as discs.
In the next stage, noodle discs roast with oil and to be left for drying. Dried discs, then
, put in the cups to add vegetables and spices. Lastly
, the cups are sealed and their label’s
are Change the noun form
labels
label
being
attached.Unnecessary verb
apply
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