The following chart shows the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing preferences of UK people.

The following chart shows the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing preferences of UK people.
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bar chart illustrates how the British chose their house
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3 cities in the UK in 2009.
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, there were differences in the housing choice over 3 cities.
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most British chose to live in the apartments, the opposite could be seen in terraced homes. Standing at 60%, most residents in Liverpool preferred apartments, double Londoners’ choices with 30% and nearly triple Manchesters’ with 20%.
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, terraced
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were the least popular choices over 3 locations which was only one-third of the highest.
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20% of Londoners preferred terraced
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, these numbers for 2 other cities were half of that, at 10%.
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, Londons’ residents and Manchesters’ residents shared the same percentage in semi-detached
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, at 40%.
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number doubled Liverpool which was 20%. Detached
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attracted most of Manchester’s people over 4 types of house with 35%,
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number was the same percentage as semi-detached
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, followed by London with 25%, and Liverpool with 15%.
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