The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
The given pie charts present the distribution of a country's energy sources between 1985 and 2003.
While
oil-based plants were still the largest contributor to the nation's power origin, there was a tendency for them to replace those with other fossil-based fuels: coal and natural gas.
Furthermore
, the same trend happened on the clean energy side, where nuclear was still the largest source with a dip,
while
the other renewable started to show an increment. In 1985, more than half (52%) of the country's energy depended on oil, followed by nuclear as the second largest proportion at almost a quarter (25%), and natural gas at 13%.
In addition
to that, coal, hydrogen, and other renewable supported the
last
13% at respectively 8%, 4%, and 1%. 18 years later, in 2003,
according to
the provided information, oil was still the biggest contributor to the power industry,
however
, the portion decreased to 39%. Interestingly, the decrement was
also
mirrored by nuclear power at 17%. Contrary to that, natural gas moved up to the second position after recording an increment of 10% to 23% portion. Another fossil-based fuel, coal,
also
increased by slightly to 13%. Other renewables
also
improved the production capacity to 4%.
While
hydrogen-based was still at the same level of 4%.
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