The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020
The chart illustrates the people's activities in three different countries in 1980 and in 2020.
Overall
, it can be seen that they have a significant increase in agriculture, industry and services whereas
the other country has fluctuated amount in per cent.
Regarding the two
highest activities, they both have quite the same pattern for the 3 distribution activities. Agriculture has the smallest amount either in home A only 20% or in home B about 5%. Whereas
industry distribution has slightly increased each year by approximately 30%. Additionally
, services have skyrocketed in two
years about 50% in urban A and 70% in urban B.
For the remaining country, provincial B has fluctuating percentages. Therefore
, the two
distributions have the highest percentages in agriculture at 50%, as well as
in services at 40%. Meanwhile, the industry has the lowest number in two
different years by an average of 30%.
We can conclude that charts A and C have a significant upward, while
chart C has unexpected
percentage.Correct article usage
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