The best way to solve the traffic congestion in the city is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
traffic
is a huge problem in modern cities, and people and governments are concerned with
this
vital issue. There exist many ideas that could potentially solve it.
However
, all of them have certain negative consequences, so it is important to analyze all variants before accepting them. One
of
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such
ideas
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is providing free public
transport
without breaks and weekends for all people in order
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they
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reject
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using personal cars and choose public
transport
instead
. Personally, I believe
this
decision could help, and I even have an example. Moscow previously had severe
traffic
problems. A few years ago the government started to expand public
transport
networks in the city.
Therefore
, dozens of metro stations have opened since that time, and
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routes were changing for people’s convenience.
Moreover
, there is a night schedule, so it allows people not to call a taxi and create more
traffic
.
As a result
,
traffic
in Moscow significantly decreased, and citizens noticed the situation on the roads had become better.
However
, some argue that
such
a system would not be effective in certain countries.
For instance
, in the USA, public
transport
is not as popular
due to
cultural preferences, mindset, and geographical considerations. Americans tend to prefer using their personal cars, not just for long-distance travel, but
also
for daily activities in their local area. In conclusion, I would like to say that we have already had many successful examples of applying
this
system in large cities.
Therefore
, I believe that providing free public
transport
could be an effective solution to reduce
traffic
congestion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • mass transit systems
  • traffic flow
  • rush hour
  • vehicle emissions
  • sustainable transportation
  • infrastructure development
  • commuter habits
  • overcrowding issues
  • public funding
  • quality of service
  • economic feasibility
  • environmental impact
  • modal shift
  • accessibility
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