The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
The diagram provided the seven most vital steps involved in the production of bee
honey
. This
process begins with the bees constructing a specialized container,
and culminates when the Remove the comma
apply
honey
is finally
ready to be harvested and consumed.
To start, the bees must construct a container that comprises numerous cells constructed separately. Once this
task is completed, they venture out of their house in search of flowers that contain nectar
, which is the primary ingredient used to make honey
.
Upon finding a suitable bloom, they begin to collect nectar
from it and bring it back to their hive for processing. The first step involves depositing the nectar
into cells within their hive. After
this
, the bees must cool down the nectar
before commencing with
Change preposition
apply
further
processing.
This
cooling process is achieved through
fanning Change preposition
by
nectar
-filled blooms with their wings until it
Correct pronoun usage
they
reaches
an optimal temperature for processing. Only Correct subject-verb agreement
reach
then
can they continue with their manufacturing process and transform the nectar
into honey
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, nectar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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