The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spennt on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The picture displays the figures for spending on
books
in the given countries during the given period. In Germany,
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spent 80
million
US
dollars
on
books
in1995
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in 1995
and the
figure
went up to 90
million
US
dollars
in 1999.
After
this
point, it went down to 85
million
US
dollars
. 50
million
US
dollars
that people spent on
books
in 1995 in Italy. The
figure
had a slight increase of 5
million
US
dollars
in 1997, but it went down to 50
million
US
dollars
again in 1999.
Finally
, it went up around 60
million
US
dollars
in 2005. In France, 55
million
US
dollars
that people spent on
books
and it had a stable increase of 15
million
US
dollars
from 1995 to 2001. In 2005, the
figure
went up around 75
million
US
dollars
.
By contrast
, people spent 50
million
US
dollars
in Austria in 1995. following the point, the
figure
sharply increased during the given years and it reached 61
million
US
dollars
in 2005. In brief, Germany had the highest
figure
during the given years. Austria had the lowest
figure
at the beginning but it increased a lot between 1995 and 2005.
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  • expenditure
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • surge
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • steady
  • comparison
  • significant change
  • spending patterns
  • economic conditions
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