The chart below shows the average money spent per customer on various types of equipment in a Canadian sports store.
The given line chart indicates how much money
spent
on disparate types of sports store Add a missing verb
was spent
eqipments
in Canada from 2000 to 2020.
It is clearly Correct your spelling
equipment
ecident
that football tools were by far more popular among costumers that bought them 60 dollars in 2000, but Correct your spelling
evident
this
amount experienced a slight decrease to 40, and again has an increased
until it reached the peak at 70 bucks in 2020. Replace the word
increase
Further
, the same pattern is true for swimming equipments
which has Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
a
considerable growth in Correct article usage
apply
a
20 years from approximately 10 dollars to 25.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
On the other hand
, rugby has an opposite trend. It has
started from 40 and reached 60 in 2010, meanwhile dramatically fell Unnecessary verb
apply
30
in 2020. Change preposition
to 30
Additionally
, tennis materials started from 30 and dropped to 10 bucks in 2020.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that football was the most favorable
sport in Canada. Change the spelling
favourable
On the contrary
, tennis is the least one. Although
, rugby for a short period of time was the most popular one.Submitted by tg.persian on
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