The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.

This

graph depicts the proportion of attractions visited by tourists in Brighton, England over a period of 30 years between 1980 and 2010.

Overall

, the pavilion and festival remain the most popular attractions amongst visitors and

while

there has been a gradual decline in the percentage of people visiting the art gallery, the pier has witnessed an upward trend of tourists. The Pavilion has maintained a fair degree of popularity from the start of the period of data collection, but it witnessed a peak in the year 1995,

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close to 50% of tourists

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visited it. Since

then

, there has been a fall in the numbers and by 2010, just over 30% of people visited

this

attraction.

However

, it continues to reign as the most notable attraction even in 2010. 

In contrast

to the waxing and waning trend observed in the Pavilion, the Festival has observed a fairly steady proportion of tourist visitors, hovering around 30% from 1980 to 2010. On one hand, the Pier has noticed a surge in popularity since the turn of the century

while

on the other, the art gallery has displayed a similar decline with less than 10% visitors in the data from 2010.