The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
The tables give information about three normal foods in the different communities in four countries.They have three different types the first wheat the second
maize
the last
rice.I will talk about what is the highest what is the intermediate and finally
, what is the lowest .
Looking from an overall
perspective,It is apparent that,There is an increasing trend
in Cambodi
1445 consumption of rice and Correct your spelling
Cambodia
a
intermediate Change the article
an
trend
in Egypt 501 consumption,Following that,The lowest trend
is in Poland 19 consumption .However
, there is a downward trend
in Poland 0 to eat maize
this
is the lowest. The highest Mexico used or ate maize
was 1083 every days
,Still in the intermediate Change to a singular noun
day
trend
in Egypt 578 every day ate maize
.After that,While
,We see the tables we can say all the numbers close to each other wheat the first time Egypt the highest 1905 per day,Following that,In the Cambodi 18 every day,Moreover
,In middle Poland 865 per days
.Fix the agreement mistake
day
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