The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The chart
illustrate
the finishChange the verb form
illustrates
a
questionnaire that Change preposition
of a
request
visitors to the Parkway Hotel Change the verb form
requests
how
they rated the hotel's client service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the period from 2005 to 2010.
In general, what stands out is that there Correct word choice
and how
are
a larger percentage Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Change preposition
of satisfactory
satisfactory
in 2005 than in 2010. Replace the word
satisfaction
By contrast
, in 2010 customers much
Add a missing verb
were much
higher
excellent and good than Rephrase
more
2005
.
Change preposition
in 2005
In particular
, in 2005 hotel’s customers asked
considerably satisfactory than excellent, good, poor, and very poor. Verb problem
were
Next,
they asked excellent
less than a quarter and very poor around %15. Change preposition
for excellent
While
visitors the
Parkway askedChange preposition
to the
%
5. Change preposition
for %
Additionally
, poor approximately %21 much more
larger than good, excellent and very poor Change the word
apply
is
much lower than satisfactory.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
On the other hand
, after a half-decade in 2010
the hotel’s Add a comma
2010,
client
requested Fix the agreement mistake
clients
good
%39 almost Correct article usage
a good
a
forty, in 2010 hotel service Correct article usage
apply
is
better and more excellent than Wrong verb form
was
2010
, in 2010 is excellent around %30. Change preposition
in 2010
While
poor and very poor dramatically reduce just
under a quarter.Change preposition
by just
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